Romantic Poetry - By Driss -

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Bonjour tout le monde

jai le plaisir de partager avec vous ces 2 poemes qe j ai composé ya quelques mois et je serai honoré de recevoir vos points de vues et vos remarques Wink

Believe them not :afro:
by Driss

Believe them not if they say

My love to you is fake

I would swear though you may

Not believe in what I make

Say I am not your chosen way

But you are the one I take

Say what you may say

My life is for your sake

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I apologize

There is one sun I thought

until once I saw your face

Then I knew I made a fault

The sun is two in the place

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One is high giving shines

On is near having eyes

One is burning if getting near

One is beaming ear to ear

One at night hides of fear

One is always right here

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Then I laugh at my soul

With his odd weird thoughts

How could I be that foul

Telling lies calling them truth

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slt mon frère,
vraiment j'ai beaucoup aimé ces 2 poèmes, avance ds ce sens et bonne continuation....
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jolis poèmes frère driss.. continue !!
:bravooo:

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merci bcp poète...

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Sujet: Re: Romantic Poetry - By Driss - Dim 6 Sep 2009 - 8:26

t es un pro dans ce domaine bravo et continue et ne cesse pas chaque fois de dévoiler tes inspirations au forum. MERCI